Tuesday 5 November 2013

The Cursed Brother's Birthday

My brother was celebrating his sixth birthday.  He decided to have it at chuck e chesses.  He wanted twenty six kids to come to his birthday.  Only ten kids came.  He was playing a video game when they called out that it was time for pizza.  They had peperoni and cheese pizza.  He took a bite of peperoni and it was burning hot!!!  Literally burning. 

His mouth was burning.  Not just burning hot.  But really fire burning.  The people who worked there were very super alarmed.  They used exactly two thousand buckets of water to set the employee alarming fire out.  He finished some not burning pizza and went to play more games.  None of the games were working.  Not even one!  Before he could say that he was mad, the employees called out that it was time for the special surprise ticket machine!!!  

He was so exited that he dropped all of his tokens to the ground with a super big boom!!!  He didn’t even bother picking up the tokens.  He just ran at top speed to get to the ticket machine.  The employees said that they were very super duper truly sorry but the ticket machine just was not working at all.  They could not call a mechanic because all of them.  Every single one of them were occupied.  He said that it was okay.  All of a sudden the employees said that it was time for cake!!!  He was exited.  He ate the cake but then it was twelve o clock and the party was over.     

THE END

THANKS FOR READING AT MY BLOG!!!

Note from the cursed brother's mother: Aiden actually had a lovely birthday with lots of friends...and the ticket machine worked just fine. He was thrilled with the one he plucked from the air...


2 comments:

  1. Wow, two thousand buckets of water is a lot! What kind of cake was it? Chocolate? Good story!

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  2. From Nana: Great job Gwen, you are so creative. Can't wait for your next story. Luv you

    From Grammy: job Sweetie! I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES!!!! Keep writing! Love you, and miss you! Grammy XOXOXOXO

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